Well I don't think it deserves a 2.8, but I feel like you did not get your point across, that there is something missing in this piece that needs to be uncovered. I don't know it's just my opinion. |
wow, I couldn't imagine anyone giving you a 1 on this! they were probably: |
by Emilia
great poem.. awsome work.. I love it please check out my poems.. |
by Leah20
I really like it, a poem need not rhyme to be a poem, I don't understand why someone gave you such a low rating. I think that it is very good! |
by Luke
haha, you remind me of me. my love poems are almost all darker. i liked the poem and gave it a 5. anyone who gave it less than a 3 was just jealous. you have been on my favorites list for a while, good job. |
by No Motiv?
for everyone that said that you didn't get the point across...it's because they cannot relate. I appreciate and understand this poem because the same words have scarred my mind. I love this poem, and I hope you know that you deserve a 5... |