Comments : Shielded Heart; Fantasy Thoughts

  • 19 years ago

    by Erica Brown©

    Well I don't think it deserves a 2.8, but I feel like you did not get your point across, that there is something missing in this piece that needs to be uncovered. I don't know it's just my opinion.

  • wow, I couldn't imagine anyone giving you a 1 on this! they were probably:
    a.jealous,
    b. mad they couldn't have written a peice like this
    c. Just to piss you off
    d. because of their own insecurities
    because this is a FANTASTIC love poem, very original too. This is one of those poems I wish I could give a 6/5 on. I loved this part:

    "You judge not my shadowed ways
    Nor this passion, this flame of hell
    My clothes, torn, I am not a freak
    I am the girl who stole your love."

    anyway, rating really does not matter, though it really boosts your self confidece and makes for a reason for you to be on this site (even though some may not agree). well, all I can say is to keep your head up high and keep on writing because I will make sure to read your work *adds to favorites*
    take care,
    -Cheerfully Cynical

  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    great poem.. awsome work.. I love it please check out my poems..

    hugs from me!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Leah20

    I really like it, a poem need not rhyme to be a poem, I don't understand why someone gave you such a low rating. I think that it is very good!

  • 19 years ago

    by Luke

    haha, you remind me of me. my love poems are almost all darker. i liked the poem and gave it a 5. anyone who gave it less than a 3 was just jealous. you have been on my favorites list for a while, good job.

  • 19 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    for everyone that said that you didn't get the point across...it's because they cannot relate. I appreciate and understand this poem because the same words have scarred my mind. I love this poem, and I hope you know that you deserve a 5...