That's really good. I enjoyed reading it. It made me think, which I do enjoy. I love poetry like that because its thought out, and real. Good.
Rachelx

I like this one to man u ROCK

i liked it very much,i read some of your other poems and they are all very well writen.
keep writing

I love the way you wright
realy meeningfull and thought ought
verry well writen 5/5