by Kris Lynn Jan 10, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Looking down, I don’t like what I see |
Despair. No fear, no hope, just empty. Burned out to the point that even though the worst is over, you cannot bear to rise again. That's what I felt from it, anyway. Been there. That's a 5 for me. |
by Vanessa Lea
FANTASTIC. This is my favorite. 5! |
by Ashli
good job! i really liked the flow, but your rhyming was off on a couple of spots, otherwise excellent! 5/5 |
by Lecrissa
Great feeling. another good poem |
The fourth and third last lines are my fave, good idea there. X |