by Jasmine Jan 10, 2005
category :
Friendship, family /
love, friendship
I remember I used to love you until you did me wrong you left me brokenhearted, but now I have to move on you used to be that person that could always put a smile on my face now you're just someone who I've learned to hate I remember when you were my heart, my soul, my everything now you're nothing, but a fading memory although i can still hear your voice inside of my head my love for you is leaving me it's happening so fast i remember when I stayed on the phone with you all day and night it seemed like everything that was you somehow made right I remember the time you told me you'd always be there now I'm starting to feel like you never even cared I remember how much I wanted to be with you whenever we were apart now when I think of you it always breaks my heart I remember all the good times that we had together kissing, hugging basically down for whatever I remember when I thought that we would never end you meant so much to me you were my bestfriend and if you ever find yourself thinking about me just know one thing I remember |
by MaSkEdSoUl
I love this poem, but you should try adding some commas and periods so we'd know when you've stopped or kinda paused. But overall I liked it. Keep writing! |