My Revenge(Part 2)

by Phoenixgoddess   Jan 10, 2005


Please read part 1 first before reading Part 2.

He had no more skin and yet the worse had not begun,
I took out some needles and placed them in his eyeballs for a little fun.
He stirred and cried in pain,
I know he thoughts in his head was this bi tch is insane.
I took out some wires,and began slicing off his feet,
The wires made its way through the bone,made its way through the meat.

I stared up at him,seeing the pain in his face,
Soon I would have to get out of this place.
But I wasn't done having fun yet, I took out some crystallized salt,
I rubbed tons of it on his flesh,and I cried out,This is all your fault!
I put him through the pain that he put me through,
He couldn't take it anymore,its his fault our love wasn't true.

I took out the dagger once again,
I stabbed him in the heart,over and over again,and put his life to an end.
I stood up and looked around at the mess I made,
Blood everywhere and two lives have gone to fade.
Three lives if you count me as being dead too,
I got my things and left the scene,staring my life anew.
Few months later,The killer to their death still never found,
I'm an assassin,I work alone,and I'm the best around.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Mysticaljazlyn

    U kno...i know this guy who really hurt me....o who am i kiddin i would hurt em' hes too cute! (i hate him though) grrrrrrrrrrr.
    BRILLANT!!! I Love It!!!!!

    **jazz**

  • 19 years ago

    by Sinister Soire

    reads like a horror novel, and im a guy who likes my horror novels. its well written and fun to read, i think i will book mark both of these for ideas next time someone really hurts me