wow that was brill i gave you 5/5 have to go find the other half now well done it was great and soo sad but still amazing. x |
hey wonderful poem i rlly hope ur ok and you havent done anything bad im rlly worried but the poem was awsome i loved it 5/5 the emation and everything was so real very good job i loved it keep writing and stay strong spikey-pookie a.ka. pookie |
by Tasha
this is an awesome poem! its really good and its very well written. i suggest u keep writing.. i give it a 5! if you ever need to talk IM me at x0 TaSha o8 or email me RubenzGirl15@hotmail.com |
by Rebecca
That was great! I loved it! Your so talented! I give it a 7! please keep writing, If ya wanna check out some of my stuff.. |
by Rebecca
That was great! I loved it! Your so talented! I give it a 7! please keep writing, If ya wanna check out some of my stuff.. |
by Manda
Aw...I love this Poem. I am a cutter. Not bragging or anything, just making a true statement. Great Poem, btw. |
by Knoxy
Hey, this is great!! i know wut you mean by all of this i can relate to it...but i'm alwayz here if you ever want to talk...take care, and keep on writing, you gotz talent!! |
very well written... i like the way you rhyme for some reason it just catches my eye... im gonna go read some more of yours now~ |
by krystal
i love it if i ever rite a suicide not it would have 2 be sumthin like that ima look up the 1st 1 lol good job |
WOAH |
it was very very good... be careful not to do anything rash.. but keep writing! yur friggin asum! |
by Tarikins
Thanks to everyone who has voted and commented on this poem it means the world to me. To answer some of your questions this poem IS about feelings inside me and sometimes I do want to die but poetry is my way out of it all so I wont be killing myself so don't worry hehe I will be coming out with new poems my friends and fans. Thanks again and *HUGZ* to you all! |
by nickie
Wow this is a very good poem but sad....I really enjoyed it...I give it a *5* keep up the good work! |
by Joann
i love it ... you did a great job on it !1 5/5 --joann |
by Queen Marlene
wow. very heart felt and emotional keep writing you have a real talent.. |
by Karlee
This poem was sooo amazing! I really like the style you have going into it, i am usually not one for poems that rhyme, but this one was seriously a work of art! keep writing! |
by tragic
hey dont take the easy way out life is a fight u can win dont give up what doesnt kill you only make you stronger so if you dont give in ull only get stronger and if u ever need someone u gots me cdr_70z@hotmail.com trust me there are other ways to end the pain u cant rush it tho it takes time... your poem really moved me its awesome a deep expression |
by Ashmore
Brilliant. You have conveyed everything well. I'm glad I came across this, and every single vote is worth this. You did an outstanding job my dear. I hope you are well. |
by Priscilla
omg!greta poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
by Broken Angel
Wow really good come read some of mine |