Unpredictable force...

by Dante   Jan 10, 2005


Astonishing wind is blowing through my head
Because my room has no walls and no bed
Veins are empty just like my core
There is a devastation without war

My look is traveling up to roof
I see a tsunami – and that’s a proof
Proof for my sanity not for my life
Now I see clear – this is a final strife

P. S. This is my dedication to the victims of tsunami or other people who have suffered catastrophe given by mother nature...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I really enjoyed that....It was a touching dedication to the victims of the tsunami and it was well written. Keep writing, nice write.
    Dorotea

  • 19 years ago

    by Gracie Jo

    A wonderful poem, I loved it! :) Keep it up & take care!

    God bless you!

  • 19 years ago

    by Jacki

    Although it could have been stopped hours ahead of time at an Air Force Based, Based in Siri Lanka, And who really knows the reason they didn't warn anybody. This poem has a good message its sad how so many died. :(, but good job on your poem

  • 19 years ago

    by vanessarrr

    few people took the time to make poems about that tragedy... i really liked this. short but the message is there- bright and bold. nice piece. take care:)

  • 19 years ago

    by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥

    really good x x x x

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