really good x x x x

few people took the time to make poems about that tragedy... i really liked this. short but the message is there- bright and bold. nice piece. take care:)

Although it could have been stopped hours ahead of time at an Air Force Based, Based in Siri Lanka, And who really knows the reason they didn't warn anybody. This poem has a good message its sad how so many died. :(, but good job on your poem

A wonderful poem, I loved it! :) Keep it up & take care!

God bless you!

I really enjoyed that....It was a touching dedication to the victims of the tsunami and it was well written. Keep writing, nice write.
Dorotea