I want you to know

by Shadowed_Thoughts   Jan 10, 2005


I want to show you the pain
that you have caused

i want you to see the girl
who hased saved my life more than twice
and work so hard to undo
what you have done

i want you to hear to the voice
that makes me smile
and drys all my tears

i want you to know that
she is the only reason I'm still here

i want you to know
she is the one who took
away my blade and knife
and she wont give it back

i want you to know
that she is the one who cares
and she will always be there unlike you she is my reason to live
because she is my best friend

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  • 19 years ago

    by Emilia

    GREAT poem =) I voted a 5 for this one! take care

  • 19 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent job on the poem glad u have such a good freind! Check out some of mine if u would Thanx!

  • 19 years ago

    by Emma

    This is a lovely poem. Good job! Love Emma xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    hmm...i think your other poems were better than this one, though i liked this one too. The flow was good, but at some parts the poem got a bit confusing and i didnt get what it was supposed to mean. over all, it was pretty good, i enjoye reading your poems.
    SatuzKa
    p.s As youve probably noticed, im giving very honest opinions, so i hope you dont mind :)

  • 19 years ago

    by stephyG

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