by Sw33ti3
Hummm...very interesting...i liked it..kept me thinking...the only porblem is....wat am i suppose to prove to you??*thinks real hard..head starts to hurt*..LoLz..I loved it..keep it up |
hmm havent heard from you in a while? :( well n e how...cute poem as always bye...God Bless. |
Nice poem. I had to re-read it to find what i had to prove! My biological processor must have been a little slow! Yeah, its a very small and spontaneous thought that we all face many times in life And we forget it next moment.. or we ignore it.. .but you captured it and expressed it very well.. I like the last stanza eventhough i had to read it twice to get what it was! :D... |
Thank you for the comment Sedusha...oh its ok...nah, i wasn't upset...just a lil curious what happened but thanks for dropping by to tell me why!! God Bless |
by ChildofGod87
Thank you for the comments... I really appreciated it:) God Bless you All! Love yaz! *hugs to all* |
by Ann Stareyes
Sedusha, Well done, once again. I enjoy your poems a lot. Take care, my friend, God Bless! lol |