Used to feel

by BlackRose   Jan 10, 2005


Used to feel
this was real
we had a love so true

now i shrink
'cuz i can't think
'bout anything but you

all along
i was wrong
so what am i to do

i got shit
so now i sit
alone up in my room

i got pissed
slit my wrist
and now i bleed for you

***hey guys... this one means alot to me so if its not too much trouble if you've read this plz. rate it and comment to let me know what it did for you***

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  • 19 years ago

    by Heather M Craig

    very depressing yet i do know the feeling, i hope you find love again! May God Bless U
    Love Heather

  • 19 years ago

    by Taylor

    this is really great! i really do love it! i can relate so easily and i can imagine everything keep it up!

    Love, Taylor

  • 19 years ago

    by Shædow Poet

    You've definetely got some great flow to it; easy to read without any lines seeming cluttered or too long.
    I would suggest more length, but then, this poem is unique for its length and its structure. So, well done. An excellent poem.

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