not to good with love poems but i liked it your a very good poem writer.

Excellent job. I loved your choice of words and the entire flow of the poem. So great! Keep it up! Take care always & God bless!

<333 Gracie Jo

PS ~ Welcome to the site! =) I hope you like it here and keep posting poems!

wow i like how u think ... very beautiful ... i like title too

Y'know, love poems aren't really my piece of cake, but you did a good job here, as far as I can tell. Don't know why you're rated 4.4, but you obviously deserve higher.

wow, amazing...great job ! Take care,
E.

This is the 2nd poem i have read of yours and its just great... I like this one just as much as the poem you wrote "UNTOUCHED" good job... you could go some where with your poems!!!!!!! your going to be fame!

Another wonderful peice you have here. This part was definatly the best:

You were always a shadow
a vision but never there
Your words were all whispers
never loud enough to hear
Every moment I stopped
to gaze into your eyes
Your emotions still lingered
hardly feeling my cries

The whole poem was GREAT. Keep it up! 5/5

-Cheerfully Cynical-

P.S. Okay, youve convinced me! You are definatly going on my favorite's list. :]

i really enjoy your writting its really good...keep writing your great...~sherrie~

a good poem but one suggestion and remember this is a just a suggestion you don't have to do it ....
the line

Where were you those cold winter nights
Where were you when my heart was so tight

well i think it would sound better if it was

Where were you those cold winter nights
Where were you when my heart could no longer fight

but other than that i like it a lot
escpially this part

Where were your hands
when I was falling so hard,

good job keep writing

love this poem!! great job!! keep it up!! take care!! *5* :)