Comments : Until my Last Breath

  • 19 years ago

    by nickie

    Wow this is one of the best poems I've ever read...it's awesome even though it's very sad...you did a great job and I give it a *5*...keep up the good work! I loved it!

    Love
    Nickie

  • 19 years ago

    by *~^Heart*Broken^~*

    so u shot yourself but your still alive? scary.

  • 19 years ago

    by Broken

    wow...im speechless....that was so intense...wow...im so sorry ...i give to you my best hopes...keep your head up

  • 19 years ago

    by kyla

    this is really good....sad...but good! i dont really know what else to say but NICE JOB!!=D

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    AMAZING poem!!!!!!!!! Enjoyed it very much..even though it spooked me a bit. The last bit was a relief..im glad its not a true story..

    §The Only Rose In This Desert§

  • 19 years ago

    by Deadly Love

    very well written, keep up the good work

  • 19 years ago

    by Sweet As Sugar

    WOOOW!! AMAAAAZING POEM !!
    I LOVE IT !

  • 19 years ago

    by *Miss*Sammy*

    wow that was aesoe! keep up the gr8 work! <33Miss*Sammy

  • 19 years ago

    by Dwain

    very well written

  • 19 years ago

    by Tianna

    don't ever commit suicide, you won't go anywhere happy if you do,. don't even think about it and i know its not true but im just saying

  • 19 years ago

    by SilentSymphony

    Wow, this was really kewl. I liked how it kinda had that Romeo and Juliet touch. But this was completly breathtaking. i loved it. And i love the meaning. That eternal love that no one ever wants to let go.
    Really really really great job.

    Peace
    -courtney-

  • 19 years ago

    by Christina Gomes

    wow thats a great poem, it's so deep. i rly like...plzz rate my poems, and keep writing i luv ur stuff...great job

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah

    Your poem is REALLY good and as i was reading it tears were rollin down my face! that's how good it was!

  • 19 years ago

    by highschoolgirl

    *it's so niCe* greAt poEm* aLmoSt criEd LOL... ehehhe...* niCe jOb*

  • 19 years ago

    by stephalee

    omg that is so beatuiful u have an amazing gift

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    amazing poem, it made me cry! i would love to read more from u, and i am sorry u loss take care xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by Brittany

    amazing poem, it made me cry! i would love to read more from u, and i am sorry u loss take care xoxox

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Awwww :( Excellent poem. Very moving.
    Take care,
    ♥~♥xRachelx♥~♥

  • 19 years ago

    by Kathryn

    This is such a nice poem yet so sad , i brought a tear to my eye . Well done xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Kathryn

    This is such a nice poem yet so sad , it
    brought a tear to my eye . Well done xxx