by nickie
Wow this is one of the best poems I've ever read...it's awesome even though it's very sad...you did a great job and I give it a *5*...keep up the good work! I loved it! |
so u shot yourself but your still alive? scary. |
by Broken
wow...im speechless....that was so intense...wow...im so sorry ...i give to you my best hopes...keep your head up |
by kyla
this is really good....sad...but good! i dont really know what else to say but NICE JOB!!=D |
by Sarah
AMAZING poem!!!!!!!!! Enjoyed it very much..even though it spooked me a bit. The last bit was a relief..im glad its not a true story.. |
by Deadly Love
very well written, keep up the good work |
WOOOW!! AMAAAAZING POEM !! |
by *Miss*Sammy*
wow that was aesoe! keep up the gr8 work! <33Miss*Sammy |
by Dwain
very well written |
by Tianna
don't ever commit suicide, you won't go anywhere happy if you do,. don't even think about it and i know its not true but im just saying |
Wow, this was really kewl. I liked how it kinda had that Romeo and Juliet touch. But this was completly breathtaking. i loved it. And i love the meaning. That eternal love that no one ever wants to let go. |
wow thats a great poem, it's so deep. i rly like...plzz rate my poems, and keep writing i luv ur stuff...great job |
by Sarah
Your poem is REALLY good and as i was reading it tears were rollin down my face! that's how good it was! |
*it's so niCe* greAt poEm* aLmoSt criEd LOL... ehehhe...* niCe jOb* |
by stephalee
omg that is so beatuiful u have an amazing gift |
by Brittany
amazing poem, it made me cry! i would love to read more from u, and i am sorry u loss take care xoxox |
by Brittany
amazing poem, it made me cry! i would love to read more from u, and i am sorry u loss take care xoxox |
by xRachelx
Awwww :( Excellent poem. Very moving. |
by Kathryn
This is such a nice poem yet so sad , i brought a tear to my eye . Well done xxx |
by Kathryn
This is such a nice poem yet so sad , it |