I loved this poem you are so good at making poems riming. I like writting poems like that it's just that I can't get them to rime like that.

this was a great poem even though its was sad

Long, but filled with lotsa pain and emotions..

This was an amazing poem. I felt like I was in your head, that's how powerful of a writer you are. You take the situation and explain so that the reader feels like they are in your shoes. You ahve a wonderful talent. Keep writing. If this poem is based on fact I am terribly sorry

Loved your poem! I cant relate to it but i was touched by it! Hope your taking care x x

it was really sad, and it made me want to cry

that is soo sad and if that were me i would tell my mom screw their relationship if she really loved me she would understand and leave his ass. EXCELLENT POEM!!!

This poem, I found it extremely sad and if only this were a movie, it would be good to watch it too. Damn step fathers these days, ain't got nothing better to do. Thats harsh. For a person to rape is the most fuked up and traumatizing thing to do 2 someone. Damn... really nicely writen. you go girl!
what made you write this? ....

TaKe Care

CyN

All I can say is WOW!!! I absolutely loved this poem. It explains all your feelings soooo deeply. It's awesome girl. I rated you a definate 5, and if it was possible I would give you more.
I hope that you will read and rate my poems and comment on them too.
Especially How can you do it....its meant for people like your stepdad. I really hope you get better hunny...there's always a light and the end of the long dark tunnel.

that was amazing... i truly know how you feel. your writing is increadable... i really hope you will get over it. i really hope you will... great job

good job.. heh.. i can relate. it wasn't my step dad but it was a family member. it's sort of over now but yep yep. this poem is very good =]

keep writing
~Rigena

Wow, that was deep. My friend went through that about 5 years ago...she's still not the same but I'm going to show her this so she knows she's not alone. Keep up the great writing.

Man beautiful flow and great poem. You write really really well

Omg this is so touching becuz this has happend 2 me b4 not by my step dad but from my own brother and he finally stoped now that he has a gf but i fear 4 her more than i fear 4 myself so keep writing ur reaching a lot of gurls

This was a very well-written, powerful poem... You really need to tell your mom because she can save you from that monster. If your boyfriend leaves you when you need him, then he doesn't deserve you in the first place. You should tell both of them, because they can help you emotionally, and can keep him from doing this again... I really hope this works out in your favor.