Hmm this isn't one of your best pieces. The repitition doesn't flow well and how you rhymed and then didn't, I don't know I didn't like that. But I like how you will write no matter what people think. =) Good for you. |
by Todd Geatz
Keep It up! |
by Dorotea©
Well i liked that...because it was pretty simple but it showed your passion for writing. Take care, |