dude u really shuldn rite in ur own comment thing, lol .. j/p ... well this is a great poem .. almost like my relationship .. u know until it ended lol well gud luk 2 u n da luky special u hook up wit nx!! xoXox peace

good poem

this poem was deep i loved it ....
and think u for commenting on my poem

i love it.

Yeah this poem was good. It took me a few trys to get into the flow of it, but I really liked it. keep up the good work and thanks for the comment!

I love it sad but very good :) sorry this happen to you! you have some wonderful poems? high 5/5

I loved it Great one Thanks for all the comments!

Chris

omg i know exactly what your talken bout i know how u feel this poem is so good make shure u get some more please, i.m me flavagrl313 , bye :-D

this is really touching...iknow wat its like going through it...really nice poem...take a 5! thanx for ur comments :)
cheers~

This poem was really good. U should keep writing too! haha.. if u have aol or icq my number 178224383!

i really like this poem well done 5/5 good job. I know you will find someone else who can love you for you.
~!~Noelle~!~

Rebecca

Your poem was not bad, it was good. It is always good to express yourself so keep at it. Thanks for your comments on my poems I really appreciate it. Thanks for the support and just take one day at a time and before you know it you won't even think about him. You are better off without him. Keep being you!
Lisa Larson

Hey ur poem was good and very interestin! It had me thinkin of things! great poem~

Hey thanx for the comment. I don't really see any reason though why you need to cuss in this poem. I like the poem but that kind of threw me off. Keep writing though. good job.

Im so sorry this happend man !!
WHat with this dumass boy man
my first love walk out on me to
hurt me so much I cryed every nite

I am in love with your poems!they're awsome!!keep on writting!hehe

omg great poem!!! i realli liked it XOxo stephy :)

hey this is a really good poem again and i really like it its awesome :D but yea kep writing i will look for yur work yu are really talented
xox julie
check out my poems please

I didn't really like it too much. not trying to be rude but I think you could have made it flow a little better in spots. But still...it was a good write.

umm i liked that one better than the other one umm the first part of it kinda seemed like you were just talkin to him which is ok but the end was awesome ... later keep up you'll get through it hun!