It's an excellent poem! Keep it up!

I thought i had left a comment for this poem. Now i worry wheather i left it for the wrong person!
This is a sweet poem. I could see your smiling face and feel your happiness in the poem. As you mentioned that its your true experience.. I am happy for you. Keep writing.
Regards Trincy.

ooo pretty poem i really liked it keep it up
~rock on~

hey there,
reading ur poems after quite a while,
its really well written, 5 of 5 for this one,
believe me 1st kiss is one of the sweetest feeling of ur life,
i hope u hav millions of kissses waiting 2 touch ur lips.
anyways keep up the good work and do check mine too.

hey there,
reading ur poems after quite a while,
its really well written, 5 of 5 for this one,
believe me 1st kiss is one of the sweetest feeling of ur life,
i hope u hav millions of kissses waiting 2 touch ur lips.
anyways keep up the good work and do check mine too.