Wow, awesome poem hun, your real good at writing bout vamps =). Loved it! thought it was exceellent...keep writing forever hun, your soooooooo amazing <3<3 xxxxx love you lots

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

Fantastic! Brilliant. Keep writing!
Gurdy x (GoddessOfWings)

Excellent!!!!!!!!! I love vampires u did an awsome job!

**jazz**

I also liked this poem a lot. It had a great rythem to it and I loved the rhyming too.This part was cool too:

One remains out in the cold
He does not fit the common mold
The monster born he will remain
Taking torment as well as pain

Just plain wonderful =]

this is soooooooOOOO good!!I will give you a five,but remember,vampires do not eat meat lol.im making a vampire book so i hope you read it one day.and what did you mean request?love,rain.

i dont get what you mean.. Reguest? thankyou for your comments

*request.. sorry about that spelling

That was a cool poem. One of my favorite vampire ones. Keep up the great work.

Amazing poem, as usual !!!! I love the way you write about vampires !!!!! Keep up the good work !!! Love,
E.

Different......but EXCELLENT! Really good. Wow!
Take care,
♥~♥xRachelx♥~♥

Kinda scary but good

Very nice vampire poem! Among the best I've read in a long time - good work!
I like your vision about a vampire's life; it has something unique in it =)
5/5