I am so bored with life so i wrote this, let me know what you think

Wow, I love it... you may not write much but when you do your poems are amazing!! haha maybe not as good as Bobby's "when you gave it up to me", lol... but pretty damn close! lol u kno i love ya...
-Mols

Wow! this is wonderful! keep up the good work!

YOU NEED TO WRITE MORE!

that poem is good john, i like it... i know i havent really read much of yours but i've read them jus not commented on them... lol your an awesome writer... and this is not jus lil sis trying to boost her big bro's ego. (cuz it dont need to be boosted lol j/k) but u truely are a great writer.

Thanks everyone

Beautiful Johnny.
Simply Beautiful.

Failed

you are soo amazzinggg...i can't say that enough cos no matter how many times i say it, it still doesn't explain just how awesome you are. I love this one...so beautiful...touching...you inspire me to write <33 i love it xx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

I really like how you write keep it up. ;-)