Suicidal Salvation ::: Freedom

by John123   Jan 11, 2005


Why have you cursed me? ... I can not flee
this life of pain; this strain.
I want to know why! ... no answer ... sigh.

I'm starting to see
that, here, I will remain
no matter how hard I try.

It's my only plea,
erase this stain;
this guy.

The only sanity
Is knowing that I'm insane.
Let me leave this sty!

Why cant it be
that I be slain
and just die.

The only key
is to cut another vein.
Goodbye.

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  • 19 years ago

    by Flea

    Hey I'ma just gonna go straight to the point here...no offense but this was a let down compared to your earlier poetry...not as much power or emotion...I'm positive there would've been as you were writing it but as a reader it is quite powerless...i hope you don't get offended with this criticism as i know my poetry isn't even close to brilliant...
    But despite all that I did enjoy the poem just not as much as previous works from you...
    Keep Scribblin'
    Catch Ya

  • 19 years ago

    by no1important

    Hey good poem. Hope u got over ur parents divorce. Mine want 1 but won't get 1 cuz of me and my sister so instead they fight constaly. it sucks. Hey i love AC/DC and Led Zepplin! T.N.T. and Black Dog r my anthems!

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