Hey good poem. Hope u got over ur parents divorce. Mine want 1 but won't get 1 cuz of me and my sister so instead they fight constaly. it sucks. Hey i love AC/DC and Led Zepplin! T.N.T. and Black Dog r my anthems!

Hey I'ma just gonna go straight to the point here...no offense but this was a let down compared to your earlier poetry...not as much power or emotion...I'm positive there would've been as you were writing it but as a reader it is quite powerless...i hope you don't get offended with this criticism as i know my poetry isn't even close to brilliant...
But despite all that I did enjoy the poem just not as much as previous works from you...
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