*Laughs* yes thank you. |
by pinkalias
I liked your message and your worded text, and some of your symbols were quite lovely, but this wasn't my favorite from you. The usual power and emotion wasn't there, there was no ignited passion or connection that I usually get from your work. This piece seemed well written, but not as intriguing and in depth as your others. |
You are quite right, actually. Lord knows I didn't expect anyone to bring it up, many would not *chuckles*. |
by FTS Miles
I enjoy the introspective stroll inherent to this poem; wholly human. But as a poem, there's a meandering to the emotion and pensives. Was it intentional and consequently tone? Or did you lose sight of where you were walking? |
It's pretty much as afore mentioned. I was tip toeing through a basic inexperience. Reality has never been my...fortay? |
by Bret Higgins
Again, words to express more than one. Everytime I read I gain a new ideal. |
by erely
I have always liked your writings your intelligence shines through and the inagery is great...Good Luck Elizabeth |
by Dare Id
The first line of your poem is encouraging...It's such an expressive poem with rhymes...Keep writing |
by Dare Id
The first line of your poem is encouraging...It's such an expressive poem with rhymes...Keep writing |
Strive On.... |