Plastered smiles

That poem was awesome. Very well delivered message hon keep up the good work Much Love JJ

this was a nice poem. i understood what your message was. it's sad but it's true.

I understand evey word......I straitened up when I got pregnant, because of the fear I had in me that I had unknowingly hurt my daughter before she was even born. Thanks for your comment....and yes, I love her very much, everyday.

There aren't really many flaws in this poem, so I'm not sure what to say. Hehe. Erm, a few of your lines could do with balancing to enable your poem to flow a little easier. But nothing major. Too impressed with your phrasing to care really. Again, Great poem. Well done Take care :)
-Laura.

Truthfully, I was pretty touched by this poem. On the average poem I'd have a whole paragraph of critiques, but I can't seem to find any worth writing down for your excellent poem. Keep it up, and thanks for your comments :)