As the story unfolds

People come and people go,
Kids gets older, and children grow
Way back when, before I was born
The world was in ruins, its people were torn
Unfair treatment, deadly working of slaves
Making African Americans feel like they lived in caves
The cruel white men picked em’
Making all blacks the victims
Till finally the slaves decided it was their rights they were going to find
And now they all are considered one of our kind
Now everything has changed, everyone is equal
But the fret was just over for something new to come out:
The world’s sequel
Innocent children went, Innocent children were taught
That it was the Jews who were the ones who were to be fought
A million of deaths, suffers and tears
Millions of lives lost through the years
Sooner felt much like later, and the Jew were finally set free
But the years went by with no mistakes and finally it’s our generation you see
Babies being killed, smoking a storm, fighting one another
Our life’s a wreck full of judging one another
We as people go from wrongs to right
Just to change and then create a new fight
From mistake to mistake
Life whatever you take
Do you wanna be the problem?
Or the one that goes and solves em’
Change your life, and make a change
Maybe if everyone did life wouldn’t feel so strange

please tell me what you think!!!!!!!!!!!!! because this is for school and i really need to know if its good or not! please comment i don't care if you tell me it's bad i need to know if it can put under the category of making changes