by Gabby Jan 12, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
There’s something about your eyes, |
by Gabby
hey gabs your poem was good. i loved it and i have a feeling its about jonathan. :) am i right?? i bet i am. well, i LOVED it. i'll see ya later hon. have a good day. |
Good Poem. I think it was good, especially the ending, but I think you need to work on your beat as well. But the lyrics were great. Sorry bout the negative comment, but its what I think |