by ..::Angel of your darkness::.. Jan 12, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
Tears of ice |
by Koan
This verse has a such a beautiful flow, rhythm yet speaks so much sadness... |
by mistake
These stories are not held up to the light enough. A thoughtful piece to be sure. This world sure can be bleak. Enjoyed the writing style. |
by jojo88
Sad true stoy good poem |
by Tiffany
This was really sad.. but Brilliant.. You have a very good talent..keep to it!.. lol.. |
by WaitAutumn
I luv the way it written simply, wit the short phrases..but still gives out aloooooooooot of emotion. hey i notices you usually make the 2nd n 4th rime. is that on purpose, to do it often? its really good. =P |