Suicide at 6 o'clock

by bucky   Jan 12, 2005


It’s hard to breathe,
I feel like I am suffocating inside.
I don’t know who to run to,
I don’t know where to hide.

I have been given pain,
I have been left with sorrows.
The thoughts that remain in my head,
Leaves me hoping for a better tomorrow

There’s to much pressure building up,
I can’t take it any more.
There’s a new way I want to live,
One different from my life before.

I wish someone would have showed me the way,
I only wish that someone would have been that kind.
Maybe then I wouldn’t have attempted suicide,
Maybe then I wouldn’t have lost my mind.

So as the clock continues to tick,
I begin to feel my time here decrease.
And when the clock strikes six,
My soul I will once again try to release.

For this is the only way for me to get rid of the pain,
This is the only way for my mind to rest in peace.

© John Buckwheat 2004

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  • 19 years ago

    by Kayla

    good job....it definetly seems to me like you struggled through this one...i dono it is just what I think...your other poems fit together a lot nicer...here i think the idea was scattered around...but all in all good job and im sorry you feel this way if you do...it will pass...luv yas mwah

    -kayla-

  • 19 years ago

    by SmileeItsBritt

    wow this was really good! Don't kill yourself! I know how you feel though...how it seems to be the only way. I feel like that too. But there must be something else out there...Something else to save us. Just have hope ok? Very nice poem I enjoyed reading it!!
    Love Always,
    Angel

  • 19 years ago

    by ?

    Great job, love the poem and I also really like the title xxx

  • 19 years ago

    by xRachelx

    Your a really talented writer. This is another amazing poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
    Take care,
    Rachelxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Elise

    very emmotional and very intence...I loved it ! It's amazing...Keep up the good work ! Take care,
    E.

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