Abosilutly loved it. very well written. im speechless! I will make sure I check out some of your other ones, I am defunatky eager to!

hey great poem. i see it as a social commentary as well as a personal piece. peace

this is a very good poem,
i will read your others also.
keep on writing (o:|

Great poem... Awsome work..
5 stars for you.
Please check out my poem "Your Tears Will Dry" I would mean a lot to me =)
Hugs from September

hey that was a great poem, keep writtin u really have talent

nice peom... i can totally relate to u... i've felt this way way many more times than i can count in muh life...keep it up!

WOW...this was a beautifully written poem, although, I found it to be sad as well. The words and sentence structure were perfect and i wouldnt change on thing about it because it wouldnt be the same poem. I definately love this poem 5/5
take care always
Miss.Scooby

This poem is rocking...your poety is amazing keep it up...~sherrie~
Cant wait to read more

thank ya

GOOD JOB!

Good job! I am so sorry that you feel this way, things will get better, Hang in there!

very emmotional and very intence...I loved it ! It's amazing...Keep up the good work ! Take care,
E.

Your a really talented writer. This is another amazing poem and I really enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work!
Take care,
Rachelxx

Great job, love the poem and I also really like the title xxx

wow this was really good! Don't kill yourself! I know how you feel though...how it seems to be the only way. I feel like that too. But there must be something else out there...Something else to save us. Just have hope ok? Very nice poem I enjoyed reading it!!
Love Always,
Angel

good job....it definetly seems to me like you struggled through this one...i dono it is just what I think...your other poems fit together a lot nicer...here i think the idea was scattered around...but all in all good job and im sorry you feel this way if you do...it will pass...luv yas mwah

-kayla-