Wow i loved this poem, awesome... very well written and the rhyme was sustained throughout the whole thing.. keep up the awesome work!

xx, PorteR

ps - thanks loads for the comment on my poem =)

I loved this poem, it flowed very nicely. excellent poem xxx

wow! great poem! i love the last 2 lines! "And unlike him,
I've already moved on! "
cuz you konw.. usually it's the guys that move on.. but this adds a new perspective!! great job
love always,
Abcede