brilliant! i love this poem! i like the style of it too. excellent work!

wow that was really good!! amazing work...i have got to go read more. God Bless. love Heather.

really sweet poem.love it.especially that a full grown man can still find these feelings and express them,the true meaning of poetry.

That is the structure that we have to work with every day ... I am struggeling with it too..A very tender loving and well written tribute to your dad I love it ! Have a beautiful evening Pia