It's a good poem and a good expression...but you may want to do a little rewording. It doesn't seem to flow off of the tongue very well. Try reading out loud or over and over.

~*~Christina~*~

Short and sweet...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

great poem! i love it! so sweet and true! keep it up!

Love, Taylor

This is a good poem. Short and sweet, but gets to the point. I like it a lot. Thanks for the comment, it meant a lot!

Love,
Tiff

I liked this poem, keep it up!

This poem is short wasn't my favorite but it wasn't bad either good job! Keep writing!

This one good..somehow it makes me feel im not alone..
Dont change anything on it.
Write another one..
Keep it up!
Okies..Cookies..;)