I LoVe yOu ! (NEW)

by Sweet As Sugar   Jan 12, 2005


I love you

8 letters, 3 words, 1 meaning, I love you!
I love you with every beat of my heart,
when I first gave you that smile; I knew that we would be together, from the start!
You changed my whole life,
you changed everything, I just can't believe!
I am so addicted to you I just can't tell you to leave!
the story of me and you is really amazing and this is how it starts,
it first began with a smile,
day after day, until we got a little bit closer,
with a small hi,
until now, I cant take a day passing by without your smile,
cant handle it not even for a while,
I swear, for you id cross the Nile!
And the memories we shared, ill never keep them in a file!
What is so strange is,
I don’t know what is going to happen when I leave you someday,
and the problem is that I love you so much, and can't go on without you, what can I say?
I love everything in you even if it's wrong;
I am going to write a book about you, or even a song!
I love it when you give me that smile, I feel like I want to fly!
For you ill lie, for you ill cry, and for you, ill die!
If I could I would go up the moon,
or stand in front of everyone ,
or in the middle of no where,
and say these 3 words,
I LOVE YOU !

i know its not that good!
but please write your comments !
i want to know what you guys think !
thanxxx

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  • 19 years ago

    by creasy

    this is a cute poem!! maybe you could check out some of my new ones..if you'd like!! keep the poems coming!! :)

  • 19 years ago

    by wicked with wings

    don't say any of ur poems rn't good ....i like them all if u ever get the chance to read any more of mine, write some comments, tell me how you feel about them... don't hold back on telling me how bad mine suck well thanx 4 ur comment and Keep up the good work!!!!!
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