Datz a sick poem, itz really really really really good :) keep up the GREAT work...chek out sum of mah work if ya wana...no pressure lol!!
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Love aLwayz CaRz xoxox

amsomly written... ive been through that exact situation myself. keep writting! you have heaps of talent!
kt

hm. easy to relate to and overal brill.
loved it... maybe look at some of my work? i wrote one about a fairy tale too, although it is alot different to yours.
stay safe,
sam xxx