This is th4e best poem I have ever read in my life. I am so sorry you feel that way. I feel it too. if you ever awant to talk I'm here. my sn is lyssxo928 (aim) and my email is alyssaangel67@verizon.net
please dont give up liek me. please. talk to me. i'll help. we can help each other.
alyssa

heck yeah! another great one! i love your writing your very talented.
-K

wow that was incredible...i've had experiance with that stuff, especially cutting. so i understand...and that was truly an amazing poem >5/5<
xxxChristinaxxx
and thanks so much for your comment on mine it meant alot check out some others if you like...i'll make sure to read more of yours, and again, i loved this one!

very good view to the "other side of the fence" at least thats the other side for me. you spelt gagged wrong and tired too. other than that it's perfect. but i still say to lose the caps.
~Freak~

omg! im soryy, this is a really sad poem, but i couldnt help but laugh after reading the last line about malibu barbie! im sry, but good work! :)

omg this poem rox!! i hate when everyone thinks i hav a perfect life 5/5

awesome poem. it goes to show that just because someone is pretty and seems to have it all deep inside they could be hurting

wow that was awesome, i liked it alot, All of the popular girls out here really are barbies and i hate it, well oh well thanx for ur comment on my poem
Much love
Danielle

great poem the way you protrayed that story it was great, you made the reader see her mind

wow
great job niki
love your poem

Unloved ♥

wow that is sooo good!!
great work 5/5
luv courtie

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Wow thats brilliant
How do u right such Excellent poemS?

Its My Honor

This was very sad and so often true for many. Nicely expressed, Nikki. And I loved the title as well.

This one is really good I like the malibu barbie part ,very original .I think a definate 5 is in order

That is a very sad poem. I never really understood why people do the entire perge thing. I liked the poem. Gagged isn't spelled right though.

LOVE IT!!

Your poem is so touching and realistic. you did an awsome job i love it! such a good write! keep writing such amazing work!

Wow this is a really awesome poem..keep up the great work