Holy crap that poem really hit home to me! That was so amazing! I think I will add you to my favorites. Wow, I really loved this one, so emotional so great!

-Mikochan

Another great poem.
Keep it up.
5/5
All my love
-Emma

Good poem I like it

THIS IS THE BEST POEM IVE READ ALL NIGHT AND PROBABLEY ONE OF THE BEST XX AMAZIN'

5/5 I love this piece. The stab at what everyone sees as perfect, not being so perfect. I love it. Good work

This Cut Is The Last Cut Because I Can No Longer See
And No Longer Shall Malibu Barbie Live The Life Of Me

That is brilliant, you can tell that you really took ur time on this one, im new to this but thats the best ive read so far, it's a big (5) and added to my favourites.

till nxt time.....
Jady Lauren x