I LIKE THAT ONE.well written,5/5

aww this is really adorable:) i really loved it!! excellent job..definately a 5/5...no doubt abotu that. thank you so much for you comment on my poem. i really appreciate it!!~ take care~
*Brittany*

thanks for commenting on some of my poems i really appriciate it! this is a great poem deffinatly a 5/5 keep writing! i enjoy reading all your poems
*-Becky-*

That was a really great poem. Very cute and touching. I loved it, keep it up.
~HaNNah~

its really good but lose the caps.
5/5
~Freak~

aww this was so sweet i really loved it! Nice job!

Wow this is amazing and I am sure many can relate to this poem. You put a lot of feeling into it I can tell. Great job
Oh and thank you for commenting on my poem :-)

That is so nice. I like the fact that this piece is open for the reader to imagine who it is written to.

Is it written for a mate or lover, or is it written for a parent or child. I love that there is no concrete person to recieve this.

Excellent job!

--Sher

If i had friends like you..
I wouldnt need a girlfriend..
hahaha awesome poem :)

:) Thanx! xoxo-Nikki-xoxo

wow.. great poem!!! the repeditive aspect of the beggining of each line adds such an awesome creativity!!! great job

scarey but good

i kno you was Thankin bouh Me wen you wroTe dis poeM Lol.. nahh Buh iz hella Good doe... all yo poems iz..10/5 niKkaz... Das whaS reaL Good...

This is amazing you did a great job. Keep it up 5/5 much luv

~Nikki~

Very nice poem but the caps "ouch' they hurt . Much is left to the imagination of the reader I really like that . Keep up the great work

Beautiful poem. I don't have much to say otherwhise. It was great.

I wish i had something like this...this was a beautiful poem. another great write, and another 5/5

Wow nikki this is such a beautiful poem!! i love reading your work, great job 5/5
luv courtie

OMG this poem is so great i love it stick to writing it will take you some were

Really nice, liked it alot :)