Hun...If I got the end right...I'm glad you're sticking around. But you know what a ditz i am...so who knows. Hun, I hope you're okay. Try to stay strong for me babe.
Love you
Sammy

Amazing write hun...they title is fine. I'm sorry I can't help you out :( I love youuuu....I'm sorry <33 great write hun...xxxxx please take care...please dont leave us...please keep trying...i'm always here if you need to talk, I promise...xxxx

-Mortalidaga
xxTakeCarexx

I really liked this poem ... I'm drawn to the ones that dont make sense, mostly because those are mostly what I write. Anyways, it was good. Hold your head up high. You're just as amazing as you let yourself believe, so believe in yourself.

hey this is pretty good. and expressing yourself through words is great no matter how "crappy" it comes out.

amazing, not crap at all. well done and be strong
- shell x

I think that this poem is rele rele rele good !!!!!!

Not crap at ALL. Really excellent stuff.
Take care,
♥~♥xRachelx♥~♥

"CRAPPY?" where? there was nothing crappy about this poem. Amazing is the word, i think but i bet u their is another word to dexcribe ur porm because it really is a great poem. its a poem i can relate too, and i like that. If you are thinking about suicide or anything stay strong, ive been contemplating with that too, but here i am today. I know its hard to believe that there is something good about life, but their is. Maybe their is more worse than good, but think about the people who love you, and who you love. Do you really want to give them up? Just stay strong, even when it feels as if you cant go any longer. Sorry i startin "preaching" 2 u about life lol I may not know u , or even what uve been through, but in a way i know how u feel, maybe not exactly but youve come this far, right? well once again i hope u check out some of my poems, now my poems r gonna look crappy compared 2 urs lol well sorry for this long @$$ comment. take care and keep writting
- Me!

heyaz i can really relate to this poem espessially the bit
I'm just so tired of trying...
I just want to quit...
I'm also tired of putting up...
With all this sh!t...

Mom says I'm worthless...
And of no use...
But anyways, I'm tired of
Putting up with her abuse...

i cop it it aswell...so if this is true then well done its a great piece of writing

I love your poem. Mostly because I can relate to it. I tried to commit suicide at the beginning of the year but failed. But the wierd thing it I'm glad I'm here cause i know that I can overcome the things that make me so sad. That is good that you write when your upset instead of doing things that are bad. Some of the greatest poems are made when your upset. The title is great. It's edgy and that's the reason why I stopped to read it. Well anyway hang in there. The best is yet to come! :)

Really good poem. Makes sense and it's definitely not crap.

omg, im sorry your poem is awesome i wish i could help you out. if you ever want to email me check out my poems ill get back to you. great work, nice emotion, kept me reading. it was very well written

Hey, this is really good...i can relate to your poem...and i can c where you came with this one, this is not shitty...this is awesome...i liked it...and the title isnt that bad...keep on writing, and take care...
~Luv Alwayz Knoxy

i think your writing is amazing, keep it up, i look forward to reading more
~katie~

wow I don't even know what to say to you. you are an AMAZING writer. Words can't even describe it. wow you have no idea. these are suh good poems, and I feel exactly the same way you do. I almost gave up on my life. Not to many guys say what they think. I'm glad there's someone out there like you that is not araid to speak what's on his mind. you really toutched my heart. <3 alyssa

love the poem ur mom sounds jjust like my low life dad!!! HE is putting so much stuff in my moms head god its crazy