by SCARECROW Jan 12, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
fantasy, mystical
Lethe is one of the rivers that separate Hades (aka the underworld, Hell) from the land of the living. The five rivers are |
by ashley
I really like this poem too!! |
by Rachel Moore
this is...wonderful |
wow, lots going on in such a little poem! It is realy well written! I like it, and you oviously did some research into your topic of choice. Picking the best words is so important! Love your poem! |
i like how you play around with words of different 'emotion' (or whatever, it's the holidays, i dont like the thesaurus) and sometimes they're almost the antithesis of each other but you make them somehow compliment each other terribly well. |
by Amilo
I like it. Although your use of language to portray the scenes are not unheard of... ex. "Sky rains teardrops...butterflys dance in joy", I did like the vividness. I am questioning about the inner meaning, of the poeml, though.....but great work. |