Welcome back to posting poems on this site! :)! With a wonderfully descriptive poem too. How do you even get such ideas as this?!?! Beautifully creative, very vivid... and you used the word choleric (sorry, it's my favourite word). :D well done!

Great poem. Absolutely loved it. So very descriptive! You never cease to amaze me with your creativity and talent.

~Kelly

Awwe, thanks. Good to be back.

very interesting

Awesome, very descriptive. Unique ideaa for a poem, too. I liked it a lot. Can't wait to read more!

Excellent, absolutly beautiful. Truly, this was a uniqe and utterly fantastic piece. Short of length, but definetly not short of beauty.
Your imgeries were absolutly gorgous and your symbols, dark and incresibly lovely. I loved your whole idea for the piece from the start. An intriguing and wisely chosen subject of which to write from, not to mention perfectly descriptive and emotional considering all of the symbols within itself.
Truly worthy of nothing but praise, excellent job

You guys are so sweet........

Great poem... I really liked it a lot..
Keep it up.. 5 stars...
Please check out my poem "Stupid Girl".. Take Care!
Hugs

I like it. Although your use of language to portray the scenes are not unheard of... ex. "Sky rains teardrops...butterflys dance in joy", I did like the vividness. I am questioning about the inner meaning, of the poeml, though.....but great work.

i like how you play around with words of different 'emotion' (or whatever, it's the holidays, i dont like the thesaurus) and sometimes they're almost the antithesis of each other but you make them somehow compliment each other terribly well.

wow, lots going on in such a little poem! It is realy well written! I like it, and you oviously did some research into your topic of choice. Picking the best words is so important! Love your poem!

this is...wonderful

there are alot of things i love in poem and meaning is definatly one of them
nice job
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I really like this poem too!!