by Robert Jan 13, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
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Wow, when I'm reading this I can sense a lot of passion and love coming from you. It also has a really nice flow to it. If you don't mind I have a couple suggestions... |
by khobo
I liked it, although the beginning was good, but not great. I like the whole idea to this poem. It's sweet and like a little love letter. The flow is pretty good, may have broken a little here and there, but overall, it worked. Nicely done. |
Wow! |
This poem is so beautiful. I love what it is speaking of and how you worded it. Good job. |
by Michelle18
I liked this one... alot of emotion and it seems like you put your heart into writing it. |