Again a great love poem, really full of emotion and love xxx alex xxx

I liked this one... alot of emotion and it seems like you put your heart into writing it.

flow was good and everything. 5/5

This poem is so beautiful. I love what it is speaking of and how you worded it. Good job.
~Kayla

Wow!
youh did an amazinq job on dis one.
dha flow isz really qood and ii could feel dha emotion.
my favorite part was
"Tell me what motivates your fears to no end,
tell me this for I wish to be your friend.
Tell me the secrets you have to hold so close inside,
move your lips and let your idea be my guide."

5/5

-antoniaaa*

I liked it, although the beginning was good, but not great. I like the whole idea to this poem. It's sweet and like a little love letter. The flow is pretty good, may have broken a little here and there, but overall, it worked. Nicely done.

Wow, when I'm reading this I can sense a lot of passion and love coming from you. It also has a really nice flow to it. If you don't mind I have a couple suggestions...

On "I want to know what you hate ad if you really even care," you spelled "and" wrong. Also, I think it would have a better flow if you put, "I want to know what you hate and if you even care." You don't have to, it's just a suggestion.

And on, "tell me what I wish to know and who knows you maybe my wife." I would take out "who knows," I think it kind of interrups the thought. Also, I think it's spelled may be as in two words. I don't know, maybe you can use it both ways, haha.

Anyway, I loved it(:
5/5

-Tiana