Its good i like it...

This is a great poem! Even tho it doesn't rhyme it still flows nicely so is just as good! I can relate to it well and it has a nice way of saying it. take care xxx

this is really gd keep up the good work plz check out some of mine n comment fanks xxx

i was really touched by your poem. I love the fact it was right to the point. awsum work.
xoxo sherrie

sounds like me---ehh, great poem though!! ---beautiful and straightforward...
God Bless
Love Heather

short but amazing i can relate

I love this poem! i relate to it alot! and people i used to like! thats an awesome poem i love it alot!

wow u really r a gd writer i can really identify with the stuff u write. keep it up ur talentd xxxxxx

this is a great poem cant wait to read more of your work

that was a really great poem, it kinda reminds me of myself cuz so many people cant tell how much pain i have inside cuz i hide it most of them time so i can try to make others happy before myself, well newayz awsome peom, great job!!!

i really like this poem, it describes the way that i am sometimes.

thx for your comment on Painted, this poem is a lot like it, wow, keep up the good work.

Great poem! I loved it! Keep up the good work!

Rebecca.

omg, i loved this poem soooo much, i can relate soo badly its not rly funny...bcz like my poem which btw thnx for commenting, i always hide put on a smile, and in skool i'm that girl tht's happy and always friends with everyone the girl tht looks like she has a perfect life...but they don't know the truth...wow, its great to know i'm not alone

well written! Loved it! :-) Keep it up

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Hey good poem. Thanks for commenting on mine.

Deep, really deep. I love it........

very good.5/5
love,
~Katie~

thank you to everyone!!!!! your comments mean the world!
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Tat was AWESOME!!! I can really relate to that at this time in my life. You did a wonderful job of expressing how people look happy and ok on the outside but inside are very sad and falling apart.
Hang in there :o)
Take care and God bless you!!