certain parts were very good; others, it just seemed like you abruptly ended just to fit in a word that rhymes.

:( Great job with this poem...I'm glad you are accepting him....as for me I will live without my biological dad...as my step dad in my eyes was my only dad...Good Job Keep up the great work Much Love JJ

i disagree with christa ...your a great writer dont ever change....be true to you....~sherrie~

Oh this was beautiful I love my Daddy too soooo much! The story in this poem was amazing and full of such strong emotions which I think you commicated really well. It brought a tear of happiness to my eyes - really sweet! I would just advice you don't use slang like were you wrote MAKIN' should be spelt correctly as MAKING you know people will take your writing more seriously. Personally I dont mind it at all but there are a few people who will pull you up on it :o)
Eirisa

this is really sweet and i am happy for you!

It seemed as though the rhyme was just a bit forced as you changed the words around just to have the rhyming word at the end. It did flow nicely and was very heartfelt and filled with emotion...

So nice to see your story has a happy ending!! ;)