by Bryce Ellner Jan 14, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
other
Fallen have the mask and veil |
by browneyes
Excellent Poem! Really amazing. Very interesting focus. I liked the principle of this poem. And I love the way you expand your vocabulary. Very nice choice in words. And your 17? Wow. I don't know many teens who write like this. Incredable job. I'd give it a 10 if I could. |