this is my fav poem of urs now its whacked i love it!
rock on
keep scribblin
catch ya

Another great piece of writing!

this was great, i like it very much,
it has a very good flow, just like a nursery rhyme or the sorcerer's apprentice,
really impressive

whoah, that is wonderful! I love it and I'm adding it to my favorites list!!

I think i understood what you're trying to say please correct me if i'm wrong, i think u used like a huge metaphor of all the colors being all the masks ppl wear and how they all hide their true feelings, and deep down inside we all have problems tht we keep or at least most or some.

if im right, OMG i feel like this all the time, like i usually do cover myself up with 'i'm fine' and a stupid smile, but inside i'm filled with tears tht rush out once i'm alone....hehe well enough about me

read some of my poems, i'd like to know what you think

xoxo
Christina

Once more your work amazes me. Well done. 5*

What captivated me about this poem was the title ... because I have a poem with the same title. I think it's amazing how people can get so many ideas from one thing. Anyways, this was excellent. 5.

I really love how you formatted the piece. The rythm of the work was excellent, it really created an atmosphere for the reader to comprehend the feeling and symbols you used throughout the writing. I really admired your comparisons and metaphors, the main subject itself it full of hidden meaning and beauty. I especially admired the lines,
"Scrape away the green and yellow,
the pretty blues
and reds so mellow.
Beneath you find still moist tears,
blood stains red
and blackened fears."
I absolutly love those lines. I love how you portrayed tragedy behind the beauty and that even the most horrifying things can be masked.
well done

another great one, hope 2 read more of ur work soon

whoa i liked it very much very dark and brooding good qualities to have in a poem well done

wow, that was... wow... i really think this poem is amazing. i love the way it flowed. i love the imagery... i loved it all. amazing job. keep it up...

Brilliant!

amazing amazing poem! no, i wasn't being redundant but it was truly a great piece. i especially liked how you encorporated colors and such to tell about what's 'beneath' the mask that everyone sees. the flow was very good. i thoroughly enjoyed this. keep writing. take care:)

omg wow this poem is great ....5...

I like this poem and I love the way the last stanza is written. Awesome!

well I don't know what to say... it's a nice piece of work, but doesn't fit my tastes... and in my opinion the colors were too obviously stated...

there is a painter somewhere who lost his hands and eyes needs to read this poem to find them and be able to paint again. i would like to say that painter was me but alas :( i love it, tiffy girl. and also i am so super glad and relieved that youre ok!

Fuk tiff how many comments do you need on this poem its great i miss ya call ya soon luv cazzy

This was the first poem I read on this site, and I will never forget it. It is breathtaking:)

It's not how many comments I need, Zara, it's how many I'm getting. Thanks, lol.