i think this poem is good....suggestions,sorry i don't have any....b'coz for me this poem had a very strong message...take care and thanx for ur comments...keep smiling...FIVE>>>

Oh I really liked this one! It was so sad though.. :'( But anyway, you did an EXCELLENT job with this one. Thanks for the comments! =) I'm glad to see that you're posting your poems again, I was missing your poems. Well, take care & God bless!

-GJ

maybe switch up a little bit of wording, idk if it would help much tho. srry man, i cant think of anything to say. it could be improved but idk how.

It was nice, but I don't understand the bracelet part. And what way do you hope to find? (Second stanza, I believe.)
It was good. Rhyming is a hard thing to do.
About all I can critique you on. Good luck. Have fun with it.