So sensitive subject love but you expanded it openly and it was great xxx alex xxx

I loved the flow, the way every line just flowed so well into the next. You really did a good job on this. If i was to be crytical in any way, all i would say is, the structure needs a little work, capital letters, questiion marks, that kinda thing just tidies it up and makes it look alot neater.

Love always,
Tara-Kay

I really liked the flow in this poem and the emotion set by it.