Comments : My Light

  • 19 years ago

    by Saravana Kumar S

    Beautiful poem...nice portrayal of emotions...take care and keep writing...FIVE>>>

  • 19 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    aww cute poem...this part was really nice:

    I'll always hold his hand
    From him I'll never run
    And when things get dark
    I'll let him be my sun.

    loved it.