by ♥-Sharon Ardern-♥ Jan 14, 2005
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
After daddy die |
Awwwww! c'mon. nice cliffhanger! I loved the first one, and the second one, too. I read them and thought in my mind... holly hell... what would i do? I have no idea, and dont know how you managed, but i loved this peice.. and i LOVE the way you write. |
by kiri
hey i know wat happens next caz i seen the movie the grandma feeds them piosen becaz the grandpa dont kow bout them and they escape sorry if i spoiled it 4 any1 check out my poems sometime thnx bye |
by charity
Hey, I think that I watched a movie on that before, the grandpa was very old there was two boys and two girls and the mom was like evil she didn't feed her kids, she kept them in a attic...or something or other and then when she fed them there was poison in the food... yah |
by Ginny
excellent |
by Jacklyn
hey good poem i think they are really good keep it up! |