Hey I love this poem..it's awsome! Well I am gonna go..-love always Shanna Irene-

This is some deep stuff, i loved it, keep it up, all i can see to improve is the form, you got the writing down!

If u got some time i would love to have some comments and votes on mine.

hon another touching poem.

you got a line that needs fixed hon.
( It's not gonna me the same with you)
you mean (be the same with out you) yes?

Oh it was 5/5

Wow! girl i love ur work! u just have a way w/ words that touches me in some way. 5/5

That reminds me about my past friendships when I had 2 say good-bye. 5 thumbs ^^^^^

This one reminds me of my best friend Brad. Could you please go read my poem For Brad? I'd really appericate it.